Presentation of self-improvement

My first presentation was self-improvement!!

Member of presentation was Misato Kudo, Mariko Hashimoto, Takaaki Harada, Asuka Yoshinaga and me.

Misato's opinion was that  self-improvement is important thing and she mentioned internal aspects. I think her presentation was very good. Contents of presentation was simple to understand, so I could understand contents easily!! However, her voice was not loudly. I think if she make a presentation on loud voice, she become a good presentator!!

Mariko's opinion was to improve one's looks. I was interested in her presentation. She said that if you improve your looks, you can attract someone. I have same ideas, so I could understand!! She could talk a loud voice, but she didn't look member. From this action, if she contact with members on her eyes, members of presentation can understand her opinion very easily.

Takaaki's opinion was too short!! I thought that he didn't prepare enough for this presentation. However, I could feel his idea which he wanted to tell for everyone. So if he change the way to make a presentation, his presentation will improve.

Asuka's opinion was very good. There were some strong points in her presentation. Although she can't make a presentation on loud voice, She's opinion has a strong point.

Finally, I have to look back on my presentation. I prepared for presentation, but I couldn't make a presentation. From this case, I will have to prepare a detailed list of opinion.